Lemm shakes his head quickly. His writing is a little more frantic, suddenly.

Steering trouble (twice underlined, and he flags this part of the note at them before continuing.)

Would it surprise you so much to hear

Now I see why you cross so much out. very difficult to write off the cuff

Is it strange or offensive to say

Lemm pauses, abandoning lines and not bothering to obscure them. He scratches at his forehead with one finger and tries one more time, clearly struggling.

I can't help you understand how to fix this currently / I don't know what you did either. You are not the only one to ever have this problem it just seems you have it on a larger scale     do you understand?

Look at me

He lifts his pen, thinks about writing more, and staves that off for now. The paper is placed in the same spot between them.